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Heavenly Father, We ask that you be with me in the preaching and with all gathered in the hearing – May only your word, Lord, be proclaimed and only your word heard.
Amen
 
What a wonderful passage of scripture we have from our Gospel reading of St Mark today…
What a joy filled message – so perfectly suited for a feel good service like the baptism service that we have today
            Let’s review some of the special thoughts that Jesus shares with his disciples
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/“If any of you put a stumbling block before one of these little ones who believe in me, it would be better for you if a great millstone were hung around your neck and you were thrown into the sea.
If your hand causes you to stumble, cut it off; it is better for you to enter life maimed than to have two hands and to go to hell, to the unquenchable fire.
And if your foot causes you to stumble, cut it off; it is better for you to enter life lame than to have two feet and to be thrown into hell.
And if your eye causes you to stumble, tear it out; it is better for you to enter the kingdom of God with one eye than to have two eyes and to be thrown into hell, where their worm never dies, and the fire is never quenched./
Well I don’t know about you – but that does not seem like the best advertisement for Christianity
Baptism, being among many things – the initiation into God’s family
It is certainly difficult stuff for the literal interpreter of the Bible
And I am sure that this passage of scripture will never appear on any Hallmark greeting card,… even a religious one
                        What is happening here
Better still why are we even hearing this scripture - and today of all days – when we have part of our service devoted to baptism
I will answer that in a few ways
First – it is the scripture assigned for today if one follows the lectionary – which I do – I believe in that discipline
            Why do I follow it when I don’t have a bishop or a presbytery to answer to?
The main reason is that is brings us through a three year cycle that covers a great deal of the bible – Old, New, Psalms and Gospel – we get a lot of the bible this way
And that brings me, as the preacher, through the discipline of working through a healthy variety – some of it easy and some of it harder
So you won’t hear my pet subjects with my selection of readings to support what I think – no you get a vast swath of scripture and I am faced with the discipline of dealing with it
But I have to tell you that this was a particularly difficult one to address – but address it I must
            Now I may have said this before – if I haven’t, you will hear this again, I’m sure
In Seminary, in one of my preaching courses the professor had two pieces of advice that have stuck with me
The first is that if something is controversial – something is a dramatic message in the readings of the day – you simply can not leave it hanging out there – you can’t let a difficult message be proclaimed and then not address it
The second is – if something is bothering you, the preacher, about the text, than you can bet that the something will be bothering others
or it is a message that God is prompting you to deal with
This week – I think our gospel lesson hits all those hot buttons
I can tell you that this week I spent more time doing my background work than I have ever done before – except maybe my first sermon preached in seminary in front of my whole school – professors and all
            This passage today warranted careful attention
The next reason that we have this scripture for today’s service, when I could have changed it if I wanted to, is because it tells some very important messages, a message directly from the mouth of Jesus
            Here we don’t have candy-coated message of rainbows and butterflies
                        A domesticated Jesus that walks the lands tells beautiful messages of peace
                                    Like some spaced-out hippie from the 60’s
That all your life, once you follow Jesus will be running through the daisies on a summer day
No we get a real message - a full message – a message of the cost of discipleship and the pitfalls of those that try to obscure our Lord’s word for their own selfish desires
                        This not the message of ‘pie in the sky when you die’
                                    But be aware of those that are under your influence
Be aware that as followers of Christ – Christians, you are Christ’s representatives
 
So now that you have heard all about why we have this scripture today, let’s dig into what it has for us
            In order to do that we must appreciate a few things
–        one is context
–        another is Aramaic hyperbole
–        another still God’s passion of all His followers
–        and finally God desire for our participation in His plans
 
First Context
By itself, the passage of scripture that I re-read to you at the beginning of this sermon might be six verses of scripture that one would like to remove, cut out of the bible, those graphic and difficult images
            But just like cliché “no man is an island unto themselves”
                        No scripture stands alone from its context
What happens immediately before, and then more generally before and after are vital to understanding these six verses
            Prior to this, within our reading today, – the apostle John (the beloved disciple) said to Jesus
/“Teacher, we saw someone casting out demons in your name, and we tried to stop him, because he was not following us.”/
Jesus would have none of this and said
/“Do not stop him; for no one who does a deed of power in my name will be able soon afterward to speak evil of me.
Whoever is not against us is for us./
Quickly, a couple of key details that need to be drawn out
John said “/someone casting out demons *in your name*, and *we* tried to stop him, because he was *not following us*/
Jesus who has lead His disciples into some pretty dicey situations with the religious elite – particularly the Pharisees – in which Jesus charges them with hypocrisy and leaves His toughest criticisms for them
The Pharisees who have taken following the “law” to the highest degree - only to lose sight of the message behind the law
And the disciples have seen Jesus’ many challenges of their pharisaic religious ways – of their creation of an inner group of followers
            How they have left the people outside that group of ‘super pure Jews’
The disciples have watched time and time again Jesus breaking down all the structures that make people outside God’s grace
Time and time again Jesus has broken the traditional ultra-pure ways and sat and ate with sinners, outcasts, the unclean, the marginalized of the day – prostitutes, tax collectors, leapers
The disciples have been there the whole time
And yet when faced with one that is outside their inner circle that is casting out demons in the name of Jesus, they close ranks and try to stop him
            /In Jesus’ name – yet not following us/
                        What is happening here?
To modern ears this might seem like a side battle within a religious denomination that is trying to protect *it’s* turf – *it’s* property (and not seeing it as the Lord’s – and the Lord’s ministry)
            In another setting it could seem like copy write laws
                        The disciples had rights on healing in the name of Jesus
                                    Not any Joe Shmo who comes along
It might also be jealousy
The disciples’ objections to someone beyond their circle casting out demons, that they themselves were not successful in this same effort back a verses ago in Mark 9:14-29.
There they try to cast out a demon from a boy, but are unable to do so because they forget one little detail: they forget to pray first
 
Before we beat up on the disciples too much – consider your own life – when someone has come along and been successful in something that you thought you had worked hard for
I remember back in high school, grade nine English, we were assigned the task of writing our first proper essay
We had had two weeks of instruction, we had been given samples of well structured essays – we had been given samples of essays that were well argued – and samples that were clearly written
Most of us, if I remember correctly, worked hard and worried a lot over the two weeks, as this essay was to be a large portion of our final mark
But one friend of mine, didn’t come to every class, and when he was there, he didn’t work that hard in trying to learn all the right components of good essay,
He didn’t bring homework home doing sections of it each night, as most of the rest of us did
No, he left all of it to the end – wrote it the night before it was due, and in only a few hours – and you guess it, he got the highest mark in the class
            We were jealous – we were frustrated
                        And somehow it just didn’t seem fair
We were just like the disciples who had been with Jesus the whole time and then along comes this upstart gifted in an area that we were not
I sure that we all can remember a time when hard work and being on the inside track didn’t yield as one would expect
 
Further context, after the failed attempt to heal the boy, St. Mark writes that the disciples became embroiled in an argument over who is the greatest among them (9:33-37)
True, when Jesus asked them what they had been talking about, they were embarrassed about the discussion
Nevertheless their focus as the inside group of Jesus’ followers, was not on the world around them – the people outside their circle,
But who was the greatest, who would have the sit closest to Jesus in Heaven
And immediately following this someone else outside their group is successful in healing ministry – in casting out demons, when these so called ‘great ones’ were not
And the disciples then take a step beyond allowing their self-centeredness to impede their own ministry.
They have progressed to impeding the ministry of someone else.
Here is where we meet up with Aramaic hyperbole
            Here is where Jesus has had /enough/, and to use a more modern term – he goes on a ‘rant’
                        To be truly effective Jesus does not speak in subtleties any longer
Jesus goes on a ‘rant’ and he really drives his message home in the most dramatic and graphic terms he can use
Jesus knows that they have truly missed the point the last little while and it is time to drive the message home with no uncertain terms
/If you get in the way of even the little ones/ – one can see this as young or as young in the faith
/If you get in the way, create a stumbling block which an immature follower falls over – it would be better that you were dead – drown in the sea/, with cement shoes
If your hands…feet… eyes… cause you to stumble – it would be better to be maimed, disfigured, without those body parts entering heaven than sentenced to hell - body intact
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